{"id":4687,"date":"2012-08-22T06:00:14","date_gmt":"2012-08-22T11:00:14","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=4687"},"modified":"2012-08-22T06:00:14","modified_gmt":"2012-08-22T11:00:14","slug":"one-good-turn","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=4687","title":{"rendered":"One Good Turn"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Go for the unexpected.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n

This week\u2019s question is tough. Telling you what I do to keep readers turning the page assumes two things\u2014first, that people do feel compelled to turn the pages of what I write, and second, that I actually do things intentionally to make that happen.<\/p>\n

I don\u2019t have a big enough ego (yet) to be sure of either of those things. All I can tell you is what I try<\/em> to do:<\/p>\n

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  • Go for the unexpected.<\/strong> If the story seems to be travelling in a straight line, swerve to the left or right and throw in something bizarre. In my books, this often translates to a lovesick satyr on the doorstep, a unicorn with a skin rash and no virgins around to treat the wounds, or a gremlin waylaying my heroine and dragging her off to break up a fight between his brothers in the tool shed.<\/li>\n
  • Drop a bomb at the end of the chapter.<\/strong> Blow something up. Have someone unexpected show up and say something weird, threatening, or ominous. Toss the main character over the side of a ship into shark-infested waters. Have the ex-husband show up and bang on the restaurant window while the main character is on a date.<\/li>\n
  • Alter the pacing.<\/strong> If the whole book is slow, people get bored. If the entire thing is one action scene that propels the characters from one problem to the next, it\u2019ll feel rushed. Also, the reader will start to feel grumpy, twitchy, and a little hostile. Carry the story forward, but true character growth comes in the in-between times when both the characters and the reader get a chance to breath.<\/li>\n
  • Give all<\/em> the characters lives of their own.<\/strong> I do not write character back stories, despite my firm belief in planning everything out. But I do figure out what each character, no matter how minor, is doing through the story. I know the advice out there is to ask \u201cwhat does this character want?\u201d but I can\u2019t always answer that. Maybe they don\u2019t want a damn thing. Still, they aren\u2019t standing there watching the whole thing and ceasing to exist during chapters they aren\u2019t in. They\u2019ve got stuff of their own going on. Find out what that is. Everybody has a story. Not only does this create subplots and side stories to support the main plot, it also makes those seemingly minor characters real. Cardboard characters as supporting cast can kill the entire story.<\/li>\n
  • Don\u2019t keep everything a secret.<\/strong> Big reveals are great, but if the reader can\u2019t guess at anything, it can make them feel stupid and lost. Nobody likes that feeling. Sometimes it\u2019s good to leak a little info that the main character doesn\u2019t quite piece together, but the reader does. The reader is involved in the mystery. It\u2019s tricky, though. It could go either way. Either the reader will be on the edge of her seat waiting for the heroine to figure out the answer, or the reader will be calling the heroine an idiot for being so blind. Like I said, that one\u2019s tricky.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n

    So, those are my two cents. I don\u2019t always succeed at these things, but they’re what I try to do.<\/p>\n

    Did I miss anything?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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