{"id":2229,"date":"2012-04-05T11:00:11","date_gmt":"2012-04-05T16:00:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=2229"},"modified":"2012-04-05T11:00:11","modified_gmt":"2012-04-05T16:00:11","slug":"do-as-i-say-not-as-i-do","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=2229","title":{"rendered":"Do as I say, not as I do"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m a bad boy, apparently (In the world of NaNoWriMo. Which doesn&#8217;t make the &#8220;bad boy&#8221; title all that interesting. It&#8217;s like being the coolest kid at the comic book store: there isn&#8217;t that much competition). I do things during November that are frowned upon by the NaNo Powers-That-Be (myself included). I&#8217;m a rule-breaker. Who woulda thunk it?<\/p>\n<p>What&#8217;s my crime? <strong>I edit while I write<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s a terrible example to set for my fellow November novelists. Editing during the writing process only serves to slow you down, and that&#8217;s not what NaNo is about. But I do it anyway. I can&#8217;t help it. I tweak, I twist, I tinker. I worry over words, and turns of phrase, and paragraph structure. Every day I re-read the previous day&#8217;s work and make adjustments. Sometime I go back even further to add, remove, and rearrange. While some people write linearly, my process is constantly looping and evolving as I progress through the story.<\/p>\n<p>The result, luckily for me, is a pretty bad-ass first draft.<\/p>\n<p>Unfortunately, it&#8217;s also where the brakes typically engage, completely interrupting the creative process. My first draft, while good, is never perfect (wouldn&#8217;t <em>that<\/em> be something?) and yet I find it very challenging to tear it down and build it back up. It&#8217;s like remodeling a perfectly functional house because the flow&#8217;s not quite right: some people could easily do that, knocking down walls and rearranging the kitchen appliances. I, however, see a functional house first, and can usually only bring myself to slap a new coat of paint on it (spelling and grammar, or word choice tweaking), or, occasionally, and with great reluctance, removing extraneous stuff. Actual structural changes? Like reframing a character or altering the plotline? Nuh uh. Not up for that.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s perverse, actually, that having an effective process for writing a first draft is actually a handicap when I move on to the editing process. One would <em>think<\/em>\u00a0I would learn from previous years, and realize that perhaps I should spend less time editing during my writing, and save it for the actual editing stage.<\/p>\n<p>One would be wrong, of course.<\/p>\n<p>Though, actually, thinking about it, things may be looking up with this year&#8217;s manuscript. I think it&#8217;s a function of a) being incredibly busy during the initial writing process, and b) never really feeling all that attached to the story. At the time of the initial draft, I was disappointed by both of those factors: I didn&#8217;t really love my story, and I didn&#8217;t have enough time to dedicate to it to get it to a loveable state. Now, however, I feel more free to make the drastic changes that drafts deserve. Need to nix a scene or two? No problem. Character attitude needs a one-eighty? You betcha.<\/p>\n<p>So, something new. An opportunity for structural editing, due to indifference about the initial process. Odd. All that said, I&#8217;m still not done with either the initial draft or the first edit, which are happening in a hodge-podge whenever I can spare the time. But I&#8217;m hopeful that, with time, I might end up with a more polished and saleable product at the end of the day. Time will tell.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m a bad boy, apparently (In the world of NaNoWriMo. Which doesn&#8217;t make the &#8220;bad boy&#8221; title all that interesting. It&#8217;s like being the coolest kid at the comic book store: there isn&#8217;t that much competition). I do things during November that are frowned upon by the NaNo Powers-That-Be (myself included). I&#8217;m a rule-breaker. 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