{"id":2117,"date":"2012-04-10T11:00:03","date_gmt":"2012-04-10T16:00:03","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=2117"},"modified":"2012-04-10T11:00:03","modified_gmt":"2012-04-10T16:00:03","slug":"lets-talk","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.confabulatorcafe.com\/?p=2117","title":{"rendered":"Let&#8217;s Talk"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I think one of the most challenging aspects of writing is dialog. It has to sound natural, but not as natural as a normal conversation. It has too many \u201cums\u201d or \u201cbuts\u201d or interruptions or awkward pauses. Nobody wants to read that. There\u2019s also the question of how much dialog to use. Some authors use it sparingly or not at all. It\u2019s easy to overuse, as well.<\/p>\n<p>Dialog is important to me because I\u2019ve always been one of those people who thinks of the perfect thing to say in a conversation hours after the fact. A witty retort, or a profound punchline, a clever segway or a thought provoking question. I always want to go back to that person and be like \u201chey, remember when you said this? Bam!\u201d and hit them with my brilliant line.<!--more--><\/p>\n<p>But that would be lame. So I file those conversational gems away and use them in stories (although sometimes I\u2019m lucky enough to have the opportunity to use them in another conversation).<\/p>\n<p>My dialog used to be stiff, though, even with my cataloging of awesome lines. All of my characters sounded the same. They used words nobody would actually use in conversation.<\/p>\n<p>And then I was introduced to<a href=\"http:\/\/www.goodreads.com\/author\/show\/2384.Janet_Evanovich\"> Janet Evanovich<\/a> and her<em> Stephanie Plum<\/em> series. The books themselves are pure guilty pleasure \u2013 fun to read but more like watching TV than reading literature \u2013 but everything I know about dialog I learned from Stephanie Plum and her gang. She\u2019s not my favorite author, but she\u2019s taught me a lot.<\/p>\n<p>She writes her dialog short and sweet, to the point. Every line in quotation marks functions as character development, plot advancement, or humor to reduce tension in an intense scene.<\/p>\n<p>Her characters all have a unique voice, their own speech patterns: whether it\u2019s a certain overused phrases, a particular dialect, or even a particular outlook on life that affects what a character would say in a situation (sarcasm, silliness, seriousness). One of my writing group friends, Dave, called me out on my overuse of dialog tags once. By reading his novels and with practice, I\u2019ve gotten to the point where I can use fewer dialog tags because readers can tell who is speaking just by what was said.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes dialog can even be used to summarize what might have otherwise been a boring scene, or explain backstory without the use of flashbacks.<\/p>\n<p>Most importantly, dialog needs to sounds good when read out loud. The trick is to write it so that people want to speak it out loud. I will read and re-read certain passages of good dialog, whether it\u2019s pretty or funny or profound.<\/p>\n<p>I still have a lot to learn about dialog. I need more practice. Which has the unfortunate side effect of me using too much of it, especially in places where I probably shouldn\u2019t. But the more I do the better I get. The more I become a dialog ninja.<\/p>\n<p>I am going to get plenty of dialog practice this month during <a href=\"http:\/\/www.scriptfrenzy.org\/\">Script Frenzy<\/a>!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I think one of the most challenging aspects of writing is dialog. It has to sound natural, but not as natural as a normal conversation. It has too many \u201cums\u201d or \u201cbuts\u201d or interruptions or awkward pauses. Nobody wants to read that. There\u2019s also the question of how much dialog to use. 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